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Sunday
Feb122012

"Little Februaries"

Paperwhites

BY MICHELLE DETORIE

Little Februaries, they

            unbind themselves, pages

sweetening the air.

            Little petals, not fit

for grieving, ornately

            frail. Petals sheer as sheets,

as raw and spare. Stems,

            thin straws of green, needles

drinking the dirt —

            unspooling the white

bulb into blossom. Lips

            parting open their pale

veils. Green veins poured

            into tiny cups of ivory air.

Green straws — green pencils —

             throats through which a shallow

dark is drawn. White notes

             birthed and nursed. A white song

scored — forced out — little breaths

             exhaled. Sweet wreaths for rooms.

Sweet wraiths exhumed. Eyes

             opening the whites

                         at the end of their lines.  

 Source: Blackbird Archive


Reader Comments (3)

........Eyes opening the whites at the end of their lines.

Funny, the first time I read this, I read it as 'at the end of their lives', which really struck my heart, hoping we all have a second chance to really see the beauty in life so that we can appreciate life fully during life :)

February 18, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterDiana Dyer

oh!

e., you illustrate these words perfectly. this, i adore:

"a white song scored - forced out - little breaths exhaled" - extraordinary observation skills, she has.

(love the new look, by the way).

February 22, 2012 | Unregistered CommenterLucy

@Diana: Your initial "misreading" -- and I'm reluctant to call it that -- struck my heart, too. I agree.

@Lucy: Thank you, dear friend. I adore this poem more and more ever time I read it. (So glad you like the "new look" -- can't resist doing this as a new season approaches.)

February 23, 2012 | Registered CommenterElaine

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